
THE STILLWATER TRILOGY
Book 3
Dead Right
The people of Stillwater, Mississippi, are asking
questions about murder. Again.
Twenty years ago, Madeline Barker’s father disappeared.
Despite what everyone else thinks, she’s convinced her stepfamily
had nothing to do with it. But the discovery of his car proves
he didn’t just drive away. Worse, the police find something
in his trunk that says there’s more to this case than murder.
With no other recourse, Madeline decides to hire
a private investigator—even if the cops don’t like it. Even
if her family doesn’t like it. But when PI Hunter Solozano begins
to uncover some shocking evidence, someone in Stillwater is determined
to put a stop to Madeline’s search for the truth. And that means
putting a stop to her. Permanently.
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PURCHASE:
Chapter 1
“The first condition of human goodness is something
to love; the second something to reverence.”
George Eliot (Mary Ann Evans, English novelist 1819-80
Was his body inside?
Hunched against the freezing January rain, Madeline
Barker’s fingernails cut into her palms as, along with her stepbrother,
stepsister and stepmother, she watched police and several volunteers
attempt to pull her father’s car out of the abandoned water-filled
rock quarry. Her head pounded from lack of sleep, and her chest
was almost too tight to breathe, yet she stood perfectly still...waiting.
Everything she’d ever believed about the disappearance of her
father rested on the next few minutes. After twenty years, she
might finally have some answers.
Toby Pontiff, Stillwater, Mississippi’s police
chief, knelt at the lip of the yawning hole. “Careful, careful
there Rex,” he called above the high-pitched whine of the winch
attached to a massive tow truck.
Joe Vincelli and his brother Roger, Madeline’s
first cousins, hovered on the other side of the quarry, their
faces filled with eager anticipation. They spoke animatedly to
each other, but Madeline couldn’t hear them above the grating
noise. She was fairly certain she didn’t want to. What they
had to say would only upset her. They’d long blamed her father’s
disappearance on her stepfamily--Irene, Grace and Clay--who were
gathered around her now. Unfortunately, finding the Cadillac in
the quarry barely five miles outside of town would only convince
them that they’d been right all along. It would certainly prove
that her father hadn’t driven off into the sunset.
The black seal-like heads of two divers who had
gone down a few minutes earlier popped up and, with a gasp, Madeline
realized that she could see the front grill of her dad’s car
through the murky water. Experiencing a sudden rush of tears,
she instinctively moved closer to her stepbrother, Clay, who remained
as dark and silent as the surrounding rocks.
The car didn’t break the surface. Rex hit a button
that stopped the clamoring winch, halting progress. The sudden
silence made Madeline’s ears ring.
Her stepmother, a short busty woman with hair like
Loretta Lynn, whimpered at the sight of the barely visible car.
Grace shifted to try and comfort her. But Clay didn’t move.
Madeline glanced up at him, wondering what was going on behind
his intense blue eyes.
As usual, it was difficult to tell. His expression
mirrored the gray, overcast sky. Maybe he wasn’t thinking. Maybe,
like her, he was simply surviving the cataclysm of emotions.
It’ll be over soon. No matter what happens, knowing
is better than not knowing. She hoped....
“This is starting to make me nervous,” Rex complained.
Short and wiry with the tattoo of a woman partly visible on his
neck, he frowned as he joined Chief Pontiff. “What if we clip
the edges of the rocks? The car could get hung up.”
“It’s not gonna get hung up,” a police officer
by the name of Radcliffe said.
The tow truck driver ignored the unsolicited input
in favor of keeping his focus on the man in charge. “I don’t
think this is gonna work,” he insisted. “I say we get a crane
in here, Toby, before someone gets hurt or we ruin my truck.”
Toby, a slight blond man with a neatly trimmed mustache,
had become Chief Pontiff only six months earlier and was a friend
of Madeline’s. They’d grown up together; she’d been close
with his future wife all through high school. He shot Madeline
a sympathetic glance then, lowering his voice, turned away from
her.
Still, she could--barely--make out his words. “That’ll
take another day or two. Look at that group over there. See the
woman in the middle? The one who’s white as a ghost? Her mother
killed herself when she was ten years old. Her father went missing
when she was sixteen. And she’s been standing here since dawn,
getting soaked. I’m not going to send her home until I get her
father’s car out of this damn quarry and see if his remains
are inside. It’s already taken me a week to arrange it.”
“If she’s waited so long, what’s another two
or three days?” Rex asked.
“It’s another two or three days!” Toby nearly
shouted. “And she’s not the only one with an interest in what’s
happening here, as you can tell.”
Obviously, he was talking about the Vincellis, who’d
long been impatient with police for being unable to discover what,
exactly, had happened to their beloved uncle. No doubt Pontiff
didn’t want them going over his head to the mayor again, as
they’d done with the previous police chief.
“My entire town is sitting on pins and needles,”
Toby continued, his voice evening out. “I’m going to catch
more grief than you can imagine if I don’t put an end to it.
Soon.”
The man called Rex scowled and shoved his hands
into the pockets of his heavy coat. Madeline had never met him
before. A distant relation of Toby’s, he’d been called in
from a neighboring town when their local tow truck owner said
his truck wasn’t capable of getting the job done. “I’m sorry,”
Rex said. “But with all this water and silt, combined with the
weight of the car, there’s no need to take the chance of burning
up the engine of my--”
“If we wanted to wait, we would have waited,”
Toby interrupted. “We wouldn’t be standing out here in the
cold, freezing our asses off. But we called you, and you said
you could do it. So can we please get this damn thing out of the
water? Your truck’s powerful enough to tow a semi, for cryin’
out loud!”
Madeline flinched, her nerves too raw to cope with
the anxiety and frustration swirling through the men working around
her. It had been an emotional seven days. A week ago, a group
of teenagers had come here to party and a girl had fallen into
the water who was too drunk to climb out. She slipped under the
surface before anyone could reach her and the resulting search
for her body, which police located as darkness set in almost twenty-four
hours later, had finally turned up the Cadillac missing since
Lee Barker disappeared.
As the owner, editor and largest contributing writer
of the Stillwater Independent, Madeline had followed the tragedy
of the teenage girl since the first frantic call. But she’d
never dreamed that the incident would lead to this. Had her father’s
car been here, so close, since she was sixteen? That was the question
she’d been asking herself for seven interminable days, while
the town first dealt with the immediate tragedy of losing Rachel
Simmons.
Rex spat on the ground. “Toby, the divers don’t
know what the hell they’re doin’. With the color of this water,
they can barely see down there, even with a light. I can’t trust
that we won’t break a tow cable and send that car crashing right
back to the bottom.”
Clay spoke up for the first time. “The divers
said they found the windows down, right?”
Toby and Rex turned to face him. “What does that
have to do with anything?” Rex asked.
“If the windows were down, they were able to get
the cables through. You’re going to be fine. Just pull it out.”
Typically the strong silent type, Clay was respected
for his physical power and mental acuity, but he’d also endured
enough suspicion where her father was concerned to give him a
pretty big stake in all of this. Madeline knew the Chief of Police
had to be thinking of that as he considered the stubborn set of
Clay’s jaw. She could almost read Toby’s thoughts: Are you
trying to help because you don’t know what’s in that car?
Or are you merely trying to cover the fact that you do?
Madeline wanted to scream, for the millionth time,
that her stepbrother couldn’t have had anything to do with what
happened to her father. Clay could be fierce, but she’d only
seen him that way in defense of someone he loved.
“Let me handle this, Clay,” Toby said, but there
was no real edge to his voice, and his hazel eyes returned to
the water-filled quarry before his words could be taken as any
sort of challenge. Apparently, even the Chief of Police was a
little uneasy around Clay. At 6’4” tall and 240 pounds of
lean muscle, Clay certainly looked formidable. But it was his
manner more than anything else that made folks uneasy. He was
so self-contained, so emotionally aloof it was easy for others
to believe him capable of murder.
“Rex,” Chief Pontiff prodded. “Let’s get
this done.”
Rex indulged in a particularly colorful string of
curses but finally stalked to his truck. The winch started again,
slowly pulling the car from the water.
Madeline caught her breath. God, this is it.
“Watch those divers,” Rex called.
Chief Pontiff had already motioned them away. “Let
the winch do the work, boys,” he called. “Stay back.”
The scrape of metal against rock made Madeline shudder.
It was an awful sound--almost as awful as watching the dark, dirty
water seep out of the car that had belonged to her parents when
she was a child. Why was the Cadillac in the quarry? Who had driven
it there? And--the question that had plagued her for twenty years--what
had happened to her father? Would she finally know?
As the tow truck driver had predicted, the car got
caught up on a particularly large, sharp rock. “I told you!”
he shouted, cursing again. But before he could shut down the winch,
the rusty rear axle broke and the Cadillac continued to emerge
like a soulless zombie, groaning as it climbed out of its watery
grave.
Madeline’s nails cut more deeply into her palms.
The familiarity of that vehicle threw her back to her childhood--almost
as if someone had yanked her by the shoulders and deposited her
in the front seat at age five, six or seven. She used to sit right
beside her mother while Eliza drove around town, visiting various
members of her father’s congregation, taking food and comfort
to the sick and needy.
Madeline had believed, then, that her mother was
an angel.
Squeezing her eyes shut, she pressed a hand to her
forehead, trying to stave off the memories. She rarely allowed
herself to think about Eliza. Her mother had been a gentle soul--everything
good to Madeline. But, as Madeline’s father had pointed out
so often after Eliza’s death, she was also weak and fragile.
Lee had had little good to say about his first wife, but Madeline
had never blamed him. She hadn’t been able to forgive Eliza,
either.
Clay’s arm went around her shoulders, and she
turned into his coat. She wasn’t sure she could watch what was
coming next.
“It’s okay, Maddy,” he murmured.
She took what comfort she could in his constant,
warm strength. He was capable of surviving anything. Secretly,
she wished she was as tough. She also wished Kirk could be here
with her. They’d dated for nearly five years, but she’d broken
off the relationship just a few weeks ago.
“That’s it.” Pontiff waved the divers out
of the water as Rex towed the Cadillac farther onto stable ground.
This time when he stopped the winch, Rex turned
off the engine of the truck also. Madeline felt Clay tense, so
she forced herself to look at what was happening and saw her cousins
hurrying to the car.
Chief Pontiff gave her an anxious glance, adjusted
the hat keeping the rain out of his face and intercepted them.
“Stand back,” he said, barring them from huddling too close.
Madeline was glad that Irene, Clay and Grace stayed
put, or she would have been standing alone. She couldn’t get
any closer to that car. She had no idea what she might see and
feared it would only fuel her nightmares. Every few weeks, she
dreamed that her father was knocking on her front door in the
middle of the night. He was always wearing a thick, heavy coat
that, when she answered, parted to reveal nothing but a skeleton.
Grace, a more refined, elegant version of Clay,
took her hand and Irene edged closer. Clay stepped in front, but
he seemed even more reserved than usual. No doubt he was thinking
of his new wife and stepdaughter and how this might affect them.
Since marrying Allie, he was happy at last. But for how long?
The police were always quick to point a finger at him. Last summer
they nearly put him on trial for her father’s murder, without
a body, without an eye witness, without any forensic evidence
at all. Unless there was something in the car that proved Clay
wasn’t involved, this could put him at risk again.
“Door’s rusted shut,” Pontiff said. “Get
a crowbar.”
Radcliffe, who was barely in his twenties and had
the baby face to prove it, returned to one of the police cars
and produced the crowbar, which he carried to his chief.
As Pontiff began to pry open the door, the car complained
loudly, ratcheting up the tension that made Madeline’s muscles
ache. Her heart lurched as the metal gave way and the water from
inside came pouring out over everyone’s shoes.
Pontiff didn’t seem to notice. No one did. They
were all busy staring at the gush of water as if they expected
parts of her father to come floating out along with it.
How could this be happening? she wondered. How could
she have lost her mother and her father--in two separate incidents?
She didn’t see anything, so she inched a little
closer, straining her eyes for the smallest bit of clothing or--she
grimaced--bone. At least, if her father’s remains were in the
car, she’d know that he hadn’t meant to leave her. She’d
never been able to accept that he’d walked out on her. As the
town’s beloved pastor, he was a God-fearing man, always ready
to help out in an emergency, always a leader. He would never abandon
his flock, his farm, his family.
Which meant someone had to have killed him. But
who?
As the water seeped over the ground to the lip of
the quarry, mixing with the run-off from the rain, Madeline clenched
her jaw. Nothing macabre. Yet.
They were opening the trunk. The Cadillac’s keys
had been left dangling in the ignition, but the locks were too
corroded so they were using the crowbar again.
Bile rose in Madeline’s throat as the minutes
stretched. She tried to keep her mind busy. But what did one think
about at a time like this? The teenage girl they’d buried on
Wednesday? The miserable weather? The years she’d lived without
her father?
It was no use. She could only chafe beneath the
torment....
Pontiff lifted something in one hand. “You recognize
this?”
Belatedly, Madeline realized he was speaking to
her and nodded. It was the Polaroid camera she’d seen her father
use on various occasions. Seeing it caused a chill to crawl down
her spine. Finding his camera made him feel close, but it didn’t
tell her anything.
“Is that all?” she asked around the lump in
her throat.
The police chief pulled out some jumper cables,
a couple quarts of oil, a sopping blanket. Familiar items that
could be found in any trunk.
He’ll find something that will finally tell the
tale. Madeline was praying so hard for a clue that she almost
couldn’t believe it when she heard him say, “That’s it.”
“What?” she cried. “There’s nothing there
that tells us where he went?”
Pontiff shifted uncomfortably. “I’m afraid not.”
She didn’t move--felt absolutely rooted to the
spot--as Clay wiped her tears with his thumb. “I’m sorry,
Maddy.”
Sorry didn’t hold any meaning. She’d been expecting
so much more than another apology. It couldn’t be over. If so,
she was right back where she’d been before they discovered the
car. Where she’d been all along--faced with the nagging mystery
and the prospect that she might never know.
“There...” Her teeth chattered from the cold
and her own reaction. “There h-has to be...something else here,”
she said. “You’ll...look, won’t you? You’ll...let the
car dry out and...and go over it inch by inch?”
Chief Pontiff nodded, but she could tell he wasn’t
optimistic.
“Will you let Allie take a look?” Her sister-in-law
had been a cold case detective in Chicago a year ago. Surely,
she’d find something.
Sending a grudging glance at Joe and Roger, Pontiff
scowled. “You know I can’t do that.”
“Don’t let the Vincellis dictate how you handle
this,” Madeline said. “She’s the most qualified. You know
it, too.”
“She’s also married to the man who did it!”
Joe shouted.
The cleft in Joe’s chin was a little too deep
to be attractive. Or maybe it was the narrowness between his eyes
that gave him a shifty air. He stood six feet tall and was almost
as muscular as Clay, but Madeline had never found him good looking.
“Stop it,” she murmured, but he talked right over her.
“Give me a break! Will you listen to yourself?
Maddy, if you want to know what happened to your father, ask that
man right there!”
He pointed at Clay, but wilted when Clay pinned
him with a steely gaze. Not many men could stand up against Clay,
and Joe was no exception. He shuffled back, muttering, “Tell
’em, Roger.”
Joe’s brother was even less handsome. His teeth
were straighter, but he was thinner, a full three inches shorter,
and had a severely receding hairline and a furtive gaze. Although
he was the older brother, he typically remained in Joe’s shadow.
“It’s true,” he said but softly, weakly, as if he didn’t
really want to incite Clay.
Chief Pontiff ignored them both. He was well aware
of the suspicion and accusations of the past. He’d been on the
force when Clay’s wife, a divorcee at the time, had first returned
to town and begun following up on the Barker case. He’d been
around when her father, the old chief of police, charged Clay
with murder and put him in jail last summer. He’d also been
around when they let Clay go because there wasn’t, and never
had been, any real evidence linking him to the crime.
“This car has been submerged for more than half
our lives,” Pontiff said, his attention unwavering on Madeline.
“Look at it. Even the metal has begun to corrode. As much as
I hate to say it, the Caddy might not tell us what we want to
know. You need to prepare yourself, just in case.”
“No!” She hugged herself to stop the shaking.
“There could be a...a tooth, or a comb stuck way down in the
crack of the seat. Some evidence, s-s-ome lead.” She watched
those forensics shows religiously, recorded them if she wasn’t
going to be home. She’d seen thousands of cases solved with
the tiniest piece of evidence.
“We’ll check, like I said, but...” He let
his words dwindle.
“Oh, Maddy,” Grace said softly.
Madeline didn’t respond to her stepsister. She
wanted to calm down, for her family’s sake. They didn’t need
the added angst of having her flip out. They’d been through
a lot, too. At least no one had blamed her for her father’s
disappearance. But she couldn’t seem to keep it together. Not
this time. “Don’t prepare an excuse before you even try,”
she said. “Find something. I want to know what happened. I need
to know what happened.” She grabbed Chief Pontiff’s arm. “Do
your job!”
Pontiff blinked in surprise, and Clay quickly pulled
her into his arms. “Maddy, stop,” he murmured against her
hair.
Had anyone else asked her, she wouldn’t have--couldn’t
have--gained control of her wayward emotions. But, regardless
of the turmoil inside her, she had too much respect for Clay to
ignore his wishes or embarrass him further. Pressing her face
into his chest, she started to cry as she hadn’t cried since
she was a child, with big wracking sobs that shook her whole body.
He hugged her close. “It’s okay.”
“You’re hugging the man who killed him,” Joe
whispered.
“Shut up, Joe,” she snapped. Her stepbrother
had been the one to keep their family safe through the dark years
after her father was gone. At times, he’d been the only thing
standing between them and absolute destitution. It wasn’t Clay.
“I’m sorry,” she said to her stepbrother.
She didn’t want to draw attention to him. She knew he simply
wanted to go on with his life and forget. She wished she could
forget. But it was impossible. She’d tried.
“You have nothing to be sorry about,” he told
her.
With a sniff, she pulled away and dashed a hand
across her cheeks. “I’m going home.”
“I’ll call you if we find anything,” Pontiff
said.
Joe and his brother were still there, but one look
from Clay kept them shuffling around the perimeter of the group
like jackals attracted to a carcass already claimed by a bear.
They obviously wanted to come closer, to say more, but were afraid
to risk the consequences.
Madeline turned away from her cousins, the police,
what was left of her father’s car and the Montgomerys. The police
always said they’d keep digging, keep asking questions, go back
through the files, whatever. But they never found anything solid.
They didn’t really care about the truth. They just wanted to
pin it on the Montgomerys so the Vincellis, who carried more political
power, would finally be happy. Maybe Pontiff was a friend of sorts
but he was subject to the same political pressures as his predecessors
and would probably follow in their footsteps. Nothing would change.
But Madeline couldn’t accept “nothing” any
longer. She had to take more aggressive action, do something that
would provide answers at last.
She was pretty sure what that something had to be.
But her stepfamily wouldn’t like it. And there was no guarantee
it would work.
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Having read the first two books in this series,
I have to say this third installment was just as suspenseful.
As always, Novak grabs the reader by the throat and doesn't
let go. I was left both physically and emotionally exhausted
- the story was so engrossing I couldn't put it down until late
into the early morning hours
. Fans of romantic suspense
won't be disappointed by this heart-thudding, spine-tingling,
roller-coaster ride of a novel.
Mayra Calvani, Blogcritics Magazine
DEAD RIGHT is a complex, layered page-turner with
great in-depth characters. It's about good and evil and family
love. Is there any greater more terrifying than bad masquerading
as good? The heroine's long-dead father, who was a preacher,
is such a man. As she unravels the truth about his life and
death and secrets, she must face the worst any daughter would
ever have to face. Wonderful male characters! I loved the heroine's
brother and the hero! I couldn't stop reading until the last
page!
Ann Major, USA TODAY bestselling author
In a gripping finale to her well-conceived Stillwater
trilogy (Dead Silence; Dead Giveaway), Novak returns to the
small Mississippi town that still wants answers about the mysterious
disappearance almost two decades earlier of its popular pastor,
Rev. Lee Barker. Now it is Madeline Barker's turn to get to
the bottom of things. Determined to lay to rest the suspicions
surrounding her stepbrother, Clay, she hires Los Angeles P.I.
Hunter Solozano. Not only is Hunter good-looking, he is also
good at his job. As Hunter begins to come close to a solution,
someone in town realizes it's only a matter of time before the
truth comes out-unless Hunter and Madeline can be stopped. Well
written, nicely paced, filled with appealing characters, and
laced with a few surprises, this story neatly wraps up a mystery
that has kept readers enthralled for almost a year.
Kristin Ramsdell, Library Journal
In a last ditch effort to find her long missing
father, Madeline Barker hires an Ace P.I., Hunter. While the
sparks of passion fly between the two of them, Hunter uncovers
evidence that Madeline's sainted father may have been evil beyond
her wildest dreams. However, someone close to Madeline wants
to stop the truth from being revealed, despite the cost.
This story is outstanding. The plot is twisted
and Novak leaves the reader swearing that you know the culprit
from the beginning, only to prove you wrong in the end. The
characters are real and easy to believe. Novak's storyline is
one that is an easy read, yet will leave you on the edge of
your seat wanting more. This was an enjoyable read for me. I
had difficulty putting DEAD RIGHT down and was truly shocked
at the ending. Novak delivers a true suspense with this novel.
Kym Oetting, Romance Reader At Heart
The final book in Novak's Dead trilogy is arguably
the strongest of the three -- in terms of conflict and plotting,
at least. All of the characters are well defined, but the hero,
heroine and villain are especially well done. This novel is
incredibly taut and tense, with some nice sexual tension between
the principals -- and the denouement is harrowing.
RT Book Reviews Magazine
***4.5 Blue Ribbon Rating***
DEAD RIGHT is the disturbing and magnetic conclusion to Brenda
Novak’s Stillwater, Mississippi trilogy. Talk about a powerful
punch! Ms. Novak is a fabulous storyteller…Do not miss DEAD
RIGHT. Ms. Novak pens a…triumphant story about truth, justice,
family ties, and the power of love.
Sarah W, for Romance
Junkies
Strong characters bring the escalating suspense
to life, and the mystery is skillfully played out. Novak's smooth
plotting makes for a great read…
Publisher’s Weekly
Dead Right is the third and final book in a compelling
trilogy. This last installment is fantastically written. Ms.
Novak will take you on a suspenseful journey, unraveling a mystery
that is sure to keep you on edge of your seat. I strongly suggest
reading the first two books of this series. Each book builds
on the other, and fills in pieces of this mystery so that Dead
Right wonderfully wraps up this compelling, and very well-written
trilogy. Ms. Novak, you have a new fan.
Keisha Hudson All About Romance
Even though each book of the Stillwater trilogy
contains a complete romance with excellent character and plot
development, to get the most out of the series, I recommend
reading them in order.
Jane Bowers Romance Reviews Today
Novak's characters are solidly written and believable
and her writing keeps you on the edge of your seat wondering
when and if Allie will discover the Montgomery's involvement
with Reverend Barker's disappearance.
Karen S. BetterThanChocolateBookCo.com
In Dead Right Novak brings in new blood with the
laid back surfer Hunter Solozano who shakes things up as he
begins to ask questions that rock the boat. Soon readers are
on edge as Hunter and Madeline find themselves thrown together
and close to the truth of what really happened. Even those who
already know the secret will be surprised as Novak adds more
and more of the secret of Reverend Barker. Dead Right is a great
suspense with a suspenseful plot and super evil villain that
will keep readers entranced and kept me up for a late night
just to find out how it ended.
Tracy Suspense Romance Writers
What an amazing series this has been! …These
books have been superb.
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